I think that the movie should show the scene where Erin
escapes from Kevin because it would show the freedom she had afterward and show
why she had her shields up high. I also think it would be a great thing to add
where Alex and Katie get to meet and where they start talking because without them
meeting there would be no story. I would also include the scene where Alex
gives Katie the note because it makes you feel and makes you think and makes
you realize who Jo was. A scene I would
cut out from the book would be when Kevin goes to the barbeque because that doesn’t
really do much into what is going to happen or what has happened. Another scene
I would cut out would have to be the routine that Erin had to go through every
day with Kevin because I think after they show it once they will understand how
bad Erin had it.
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